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【题目】假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In a fact, everyone wants to successful but every few are willing to pay the price of hard work. Success is an attitude and has no real secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must first believe in yourself. On your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Beside, it’s necessary for you to have clear goals. You’d better put down your goals on paper which they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progresses.

Answer 1

【答案】1. great—greater

2. fact前的a 去掉

3.wants to 后面加he/successful—succeed

4. start—starts

5. what—how

6. succeed---success

7. Attempt---Attempting

8. Beside—Besides

9. which---where

10. progresses---progress

【解析】第一处：“For some the desire is greater than that of the average people.”因为有than ，相比于平均的人，有的人的欲望是很大的，所以用形容词的比较级，故填greater。

第二处：In fact为固定搭配，意为“实际上”，故去掉a。

第三处：“everyone wants to succeed”意思是每个人都想要成功， want to do something ,意思是想要做某事，故此处用succeed.

第四处：start的主语是it，故应该用第三人称单数形式。故改为starts。

第五处：feel为连系动词，how do you feel 的意思是你感觉怎么样，故用how。

第六处：to为介词，故用名词作宾语。故第六行的succeed---success 。

第七处：考察动名词短语作主语，要用doing形式。第七行的 Attempt---Attempting。

第八处：beside意指“在...旁边”, 而besides则指“除...以外, 还有...”,由句意可知，作者想要表达的是除...以外, 还有的意思。“Besides, it’s necessary for you to have clear goals”意思是除此之外，有明确的目标是必要的，故第八行的Beside—Besides。

第九处：从句是一个完整的句子，不需要which来充当任何句子成分，应该用地点或时间来修饰，根据句意此处故用where。

第十处：progress是不可数名词，意思是进程，前进，不能加es。最后一行的progresses---progress。