Question

假设你是James，你的加拿大笔友Jessie想了解一下你将要参加的2013年全国中学生英语冬令营(English Winter Camp)的有关信息。请你根据下面的海报给她写一封信，谈谈有关情况和活动意义，并邀请她参加你们的活动。
活动营址：山东济南
活动时间：2013年12月底，共4天
参加人员：来自全国各地的英语爱好者；中、美、英、澳四国的英语老师
活动内容：举行英语演讲比赛，交流学习英语的经验，
观看学生文艺表演，游览济南风景名胜等。
注意：1. 书信必须包括以上提供的内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
2. 词数：100词左右。
Dear Jessie,
Nice to hear from you again!
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
James

Answer 1

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Dear Jessie,
Nice to hear from you again!
As you know, I’m going to spend this winter vacation in a four-day English Winter Camp to be held in Jinan at the end of December, 2013. Many other English lovers from high schools all over the country will go to the Camp as well. Some English teachers from China, England, Australia and the USA will also join us.
In the camp, we will have some English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students, and, of course, visit some great places of interest in Jinan. Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English.
I think this winter camp would greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there. I do hope you will come and join us for the grand occasion.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
James

解析试题分析：考生应该依据文章提示准确定位人称。在人称、时态准确定位以后，考生应将重点放在文章的遣词造句上。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。