Question

14．Dear Mr．Advice：
  I am quite upset by two problems and don't know how to deal with them．
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Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the terrible situation．
Sincerely yours，
   Worried Angel．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：Though I have developed a habit of playing the piano for one hour every day，my parents just require me to pay more attention to English study．虽然我养成了每天弹一小时钢琴的习惯，但我的父母只要求我多注意英语学习．本句是一个由though引导的让步状语从句．
亮点句型二：I pay attention to my diet as well，but I am still putting on weight．我也注意我的饮食，但我仍在长胖．本句是一个由but引导的转折句．

解答 Dear Mr．Advice：
  I am quite upset by two problems and don't know how to deal with them．
  My parents are hard on me and always want me to achieve high grades at school．Though I have developed a habit of playing the piano for one hour every day，my parents just require me to pay more attention to English study．（亮点句型一）They even want to punish me if I don't drop it．
I am quite ashamed of my weight．I follow doctors'advice and insist on working out every day．I pay attention to my diet as well，but I am still putting on weight!（亮点句型二）My weight just makes me feel embarrassed all the time．Do I really have to risk my health for a slim figure and take some weight-loss pills？They have side effects on our health!
Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the terrible situation．
Sincerely yours，
   Worried Angel

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．