Question

12．假设你是红星中学2015届高三（1）班学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和家人欢度元宵节（the Lantern Festival）的过程．
注意：1．词数不少于60.2．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数．
提示词：汤圆sweet dumpling；灯笼lantern
The Lantern Festival of this year fell on March 5^th．20．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇记叙文，让我们写一篇根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和家人欢度元宵节（the Lantern Festival）的过程．写作时用第一人称，用一般过去时．内容要点：图片故事叙述作文要求把握故事脉络并把每幅图的重要细节表述清楚．
1．注意故事的链接框架，例如"Last Tuesday…First…Then…Finally…"
2．注意图片主要细节．图一，我和爷爷奶奶包汤圆，爸爸妈妈煮汤圆．图二，全家人一起晚餐．图三，全家人观赏元宵灯会．图四，全家人观赏满月．
3．注意总结全文．如我希望明年元宵节继续进行这样的活动，"I hope we can continue these activities on the next Lantern Festival!"
重点短语与句：
1．fall on 适逢（某日），正当（某日）．
2．in the preparation of 为…做准备．
3．Then came the grandest dinner time．然后是伟大的晚餐时间到了．副词放在句首，句子要全部倒装．表示对晚餐是多少的盼望．
4．we couldn't help flashing our cameras．我们情不自禁的照相．couldn't help+doing是情不自禁的做么事的意思．
5．Walking in the park and admiring the beautiful moon，we felt we were so lucky to have each other as a family． 走在公园里和享受着美丽的月亮，我们觉得我们是如此幸运能有彼此这样一个家庭．Walking 分词短语作状语，这样的结构是提分的．Walk与后面的主语we是主动的关系，所以用现在分词．
6．What a fantastic lantern festival!多么美妙的元宵节！What引导的感叹句结尾，what_不定冠词+形容词+主语！．

解答 The Lantern Festival of this year fell on March 5th．On that day after school，I hurried back home to join in the preparation of the big family feast．（介绍元宵节以及为此做准备）Grandparents taught me how to make sweet dumplings while Dad and Mom made dishes．Then came the grandest dinner time．We all agreed that homemade dumplings tasted much sweeter．We chatted happily，enjoying the family togetherness． After the dinner，we went to the park to appreciate the beautiful lanterns，the highlight of this festival．Two huge dragon lanterns especially amazed us and we couldn't help flashing our cameras．Walking in the park and admiring the beautiful moon，we felt we were so lucky to have each other as a family and valued the time we spent together．（介绍元宵节我们做了哪些事）
          What a fantastic lantern festival!（感想）

点评 写作命题作文时要先审好题，叙述好事情．注意时态与人称，运用好句型与短语．文章要包含所有的要点．连接词要学会运用，写好后要检查，与修改语法．时间多的话可以在草稿纸上写打草稿．