Question

请根据下面的示意图及其说明，写一篇100词左右的短文，在该校的网页上介绍No.1 Middle School。

说明：1. ①-④篮球场（basketball court）
⑤ 餐厅 ⑥ 学生宿舍 ⑦ 教师宿舍 ⑧-⑨花坛 （flower bed ）
2. 所有大楼四周都种有树木和花草。
3. 学校占地130亩。
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Answer 1

No. 1 Middle School is in the west of the city on the bank of Chengxi River. It covers an area of 130 mu. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and two large buildings on both sides---the library on your right and the teaching building on your left. Walking on further, you will find the gym, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. Behind it, There lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildings, the dining hall and two dormitories for the students and teachers. All the buildings are surrounded by trees and flowers. It is really a beautiful school.

试题分析：这篇文章是图画类写作，要求在该校的网页上介绍No.1 Middle School，所以学校的方位图很重要，要求考生认真审图，结合文字说明，将图介绍清楚，同时介绍细节，注意方位的表达，也要按照文体和篇章要求组织语篇。最后要给文章润色，注意措辞、复杂句式及承上启下的自然衔接，校对细节。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了好的词组和句子：covers an area of 占据…面积， in front of 在…前面, be surrounded by被…包围。Walking on further, you will find the gym, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. 这句话用了非谓语动词，定语从句和with复合结构，Behind it, There lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildings, the dining hall and two dormitories for the students and teachers. 这三句话都用了倒装句。