Question

【题目】假如你是红星中学高三1班的李华。请按以下四幅图的顺序，给你校“英语园地”投稿，介绍上个月你们班参加学校组织的“原创诗词大赛”的比赛过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

Last month, our class took part in the Campus Poetry Contest held in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Last month, our class took part in the Campus Poetry Contest held in our school.

Our headmaster announced the start of the contest and the topic–Our Colorful School Life. He also required that every class should create one poem of any length and any type and thenpresent it in front of the whole school. We listened attentively, showing great interest.

When we were back to our classroom, we discussedwhat to write about our poem. Some of my classmates contributed brilliant ideas, others set about writing. Right after our poem was completed,we started to practice for the coming show. Everybody worked hard and did our bit. Our teacher also offered us help.

Finally the big day came. The hall was full of excitement. When it was our turn, I, standing on the stage with my classmates, led the reading of our poem.

In the end, when our headmaster announced the winners, the whole place burst out with clapping and cheering.

It was really fun!

【解析】

这是一篇图画类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇记叙文；假如你是红星中学高三1班的李华。请按以下四幅图的顺序，给你校“英语园地”投稿，介绍上个月你们班参加学校组织的“原创诗词大赛”的比赛过程。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：take part in（参加），the Campus Poetry Contest（校园诗歌大赛），in front of（在……前面），attentively（专注地）；contribute（想出；贡献）；be full of（充满）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。