Question

6．假定你是李华．你的笔友Jane最近因为学业繁重，身体感到不适，严重影响了学习．因此，她发e-mail给你，寻求你的帮助．请你根据以下要点提示予以回复．
　　　写作要点：
　　　1．合理的饮食；2．适度的锻炼；3．充足的睡眠．4．…
　　　注意：
　　　1．短文词数不少于120；
　　　2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
　　　3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；
Dear Jane，
　　　I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days．In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class．
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Best wishes．
 Yours sincerely
　　                                                                                              Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Second，taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice
二，每天早晨锻炼是一个很好的选择．
高分句型二：
You can do some sports，such as running，walking，or playing ball games to refresh yourself if weather permits．
你可以做一些运动，如跑步，散步，或玩球刷新自己如果天气允许的话．

解答 Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days．In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class．Here is my advice．
First，have three meals a day and never neglect your breakfast．Keep a balanced diet．For example，eat nutritious food like fresh vegetables，fruits，eggs and fish．Second，taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice（高分句型一）．As we all know，everyday exercise helps build a strong body．You can do some sports，such as running，walking，or playing ball games to refresh yourself if weather permits（高分句型二）．But，remember not to exercise outdoors in a smoggy day．Finally，don't stay up too late to make sure you have a good sleep every night．
If you do accordingly，I believe you'll feel well soon and you can listen to your teacher energetically and attentively．
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．