Question

【题目】写作目前出国旅游很热门，假设你是某高中学生李华,你的朋友Lily计划假期出国旅游，希望你能给予她一些建议。请你用英语写一篇电子邮件回复她。
要点如下：
1旅游中出现的一些不文明现象。
2你的建议。
注意：1词数在100左右，
2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3参考词汇：吐痰 spit；树立形象 uphold animage

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Dear lily，
I am so gladto receive your letter lelling me you will go on an overseas trip , here are mysuggestions.
As we know , with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips,some of them shout loudly , litter or spit in public , which has done greatharm to our good reputation. Therefore , to begin with , you have to understandand respect foreign cultures , so as to get along well . And before you startyour overseas trip , remember to learn about the culture and custom there .What’s more , wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment . In this way, you1’ll win respect for yourself as well as our country . Finally , youshould always keep in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to unhold imageof our motherland.
I do wish you have a good time!
【解析】目前出国旅游很热门，假设你是某高中学生李华,你的朋友Lily计划假期出国旅游，希望你能给予她一些建议。请你用英语写一篇电子邮件回复她。要点如下：1旅游中出现的一些不文明现象。2你的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1词数在100左右。