Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，记述你在小区发现并救助流浪狗的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：流浪狗 stray dog

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Answer 1

【答案】

One day after school, just before I arrived home, I noticed a puppy beside the community gate. Seeing it shivering in the freezing wind, I felt sympathetic for it and decided to help.

Concerned that it might be sick, I rushed it to the neighborhood vet. On seeing the skinny dog with dirty hair, the vet recognized it as a stray dog. He praised me for my kindness and offered to examine it for free. Fortunately, the dog was fine except for being a little underweight. Since I couldn’t afford the time and energy, the loving vet agreed to keep it until I found it a home.

That night, I posted several pictures of the puppy with a description on a local website, hoping someone would adopt it. To my great surprise, within a few hours my post received hundreds of clicks and dozens of netizens applied to be the owner.

After several telephone “interviews”, a couple became my final choice since they have rich experience in dog raising. We met the next day at the vet’s. For the couple, it was love at first sight. The puppy, as if aware of what was going on, kept on wagging its tail. As I waved the contented family goodbye, I felt a load off my mind and pride in my heart. If everyone can treat animals with love, the world will surely be a nicer place.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是看图作文，首先仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁，本文是记叙文。第二步是确定人称，本文根据要求用第一人称。第三步是确定时态，本文用过去时，因事情已经发生。第四步是合理、适度的发挥联想，将文章写的虚实结合，详略得当。

亮点说明：本文是看图作文，内容齐全，语句衔接紧密，同时使用高级句子。just before I arrived home, I noticed a puppy beside the community gate. Before引导时间状语从句；Seeing it shivering in the freezing wind, I felt sympathetic for it and decided to help. 现在分词作原因状语；Since I couldn’t afford the time and energy, the loving vet agreed to keep it until I found it a home. Since引导原因状语从句和until的时间状语从句完美结合；as if aware of what was going on, kept on wagging its tail.用介词的宾语从句；另外，Concerned that it might be sick, On seeing the skinny dog with dirty hair, Fortunately, To my great surprise,的运用为文章增色添彩。