Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As Grandma gets older, she is getting more and more forgetful. I went to a nearby supermarket with her on last week. I pushed the shopping cart around to load it with what we want to buy. I was looking at some snacks while I realized Grandma was missed. I looked for her everywhere and she was nowhere to be found. So I turned to security guard who was on duty with tear in my eyes. He comforted me patient and told me to wait by the apple stand when she and other guards were searching for Grandma. It was not long before Grandma was found and brought to me. I was very grateful that I decided to put it forward and help others whenever possible.

Answer 1

【答案】1. 删除last前的on

2. want → wanted

3. while → when

4. missed → missing

5. and → but

6. security前加a

7. tear → tears

8. patient → patiently

9. she → he

10. very → so

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者和祖母去逛超市时，祖母不小心走失。后来，作者在好心的安保人的帮助下找到祖母的故事。

1. 考查介词。此处考查时间词前有last/next/ this/that/ these/ those时不要介词，故删除last前的on。

2. 考查时态。本文讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时，故将want改为wanted。

3. 考查连词。分析句子可知，此处考查固定句型was/were doing…when…“过去正在做某事，（突然）就……”，故将while改为when。

4. 考查形容词。根据句意可知，此处应用missing“失踪的”作为表语，故将missed改为missing。

5. 考查连词。句意：我到处找她，但都找不到。根据句意可知，上下文是转折关系，应用but连接，故将and改为but。

6. 考查冠词。句意：因此，我哭着向一位安保人员求助。guard“安保人员”是可数名词，根据句意可知此处是泛指，应用不定冠词，又security是辅音音素开头，故在security前加a。

7. 考查名词的数。tear“眼泪”是可数名词，该词一般用复数形式，故将tear改为tears。

8. 考查副词。分析句子可知，此处应用副词修饰动词comfort，故将patient改为patiently。

9. 考查代词。句意：他耐心地安慰我，并告诉我当他和其他安保人员去寻找奶奶时，我就在苹果树下等。结合上下文可知，此处应用he指代上文出现的男性安保人员，故将she改为he。

10. 考查副词。分析句子可知，此处考查固定句型so…that…“如此……以至于……”，故将very改为so。