Question

根据新闻报道，每年全国在餐馆里被倒掉的食物估计可养活2亿人。中国开展了“光盘”运动。请以“Against Food Waste”为题，用英语写一篇短文。短文应包含以下内容：

就餐浪费现象产生的原因	中国人热情好客的传统； 2. ……
光盘运动的意义	提高公众珍惜食物的意识； ……
结合自身实际，谈谈自己的做法	（至少提出2个做法）

注意：      1．陈述所给要点，可适度发挥，但不要简单翻译。

              2．词数150 左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3．参考词汇：好客hospitality；打包make a doggie bag

Against Food Waste

According to reports, the leftovers in restaurants across the country are almost enough to feed 200 million people annually. Therefore, China has taken on a national campaign “Eat up all on the Plates”.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Against Food Waste

According to reports, the leftovers in restaurants across the country are almost enough to feed 200 million people annually. Therefore, China has taken on a national campaign “Eat up all on the Plates”.

It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their guests with more than enough food, believing that they have not satisfied their guests if there is no food left on the table, which they think is a good way to show their hospitality. They think they will be looked down upon if they make a doggie bag of the leftovers. As a result, restaurant trashcans are often found full of leftover foods, with full plates untouched.

The “Eat up all on the Plates” campaign is intended to reduce the waste and raise people’s awareness. It has been warmly welcomed with positive responses. As middle school students, we should do our bit to say “No” to food waste, and try to develop the habit of never ordering or cooking more than what we need so as to save our limited food resources, on which we depend for a better life.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是篇材料作文，材料不是那么简单，学生要把握写作要求和写作目的必须经过分析。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求让你写一篇新闻报道，写讨论的结构如何，因此本文必须用第三人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。本文涉及的生词不少，根据提纲和新闻报道要求，学生要有一定的词汇量才能组织好材料。适当的延展个别细节再加上所给的提示，考生注意写清楚以下几点：1.主题，2. 浪费的原因，3. 关盘行动的意义，4. 作者自己的看法，5. 恰当的结尾，就能较好的发挥出来。当然在书写上，要干净整洁的卷面与字数要求，一般能达到较高的分数。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如；entertain … with…; more than; enough …, satisfy sb. ; a good way to do sth.; look down upon As a result,  warmly welcomed ;As middle school students; develop the habit of doing; so as to; depend on;

还运用了It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their guests with more than enough food, believing that they have not satisfied their guests if there is no food left on the table, which they think is a good way to show their hospitality. which引导的非限制性定语从句;if 引导条件状语从句等。是一篇佳作。

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