Question

4．假设你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一位名叫Big Boy的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助．
请根据以下提示回帖：、
1．告诉他要理解、尊重母亲；
2．给他提出解决问题的具体建议；
3．希望与他进一步交流．
注意：1．词数不少于100；
2．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯．
Dear Big Boy，As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．【高分句型一】However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings．Here are a few suggestions．（告诉Big Boy要理解母亲）
First，it's advisable to talk more with your mom．Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better．They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．【高分句型二】It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking．（给Big Boy提出解决问题的具体建议）
Hope these tips are helpful to you and can get along well with your mother．（表达祝愿）
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封回帖，根据题目要求可知用第一和第二人称展开叙述，时态以一般现在时态为主．内容主要包括：一告诉Big Boy要理解母亲；二给Big Boy提出解决问题的具体建议；三表达祝愿．
高分句型：
1．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．
句子里you are facing 是The problem 的定语从句．
你面对的问题在我们青少年里是很常见的．
2．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．
句子里proving to your mom 是结果状语，prove和主语you是主动关系．that you are already a"Grown-up"．
是prove的宾语从句．
第二，你应该学会自己把事情做好，向你的妈妈证明你已经是一个成年人了．

解答 Dear Big Boy，
     As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．【高分句型一】However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings．Here are a few suggestions．（告诉Big Boy要理解母亲）
    First，it's advisable to talk more with your mom．Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better．They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．【高分句型二】It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking．（给Big Boy提出解决问题的具体建议）
    Hope these tips are helpful to you and can get along well with your mother．（表达祝愿）
    Yours
    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．