Question

Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.
The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.
1．概括该故事的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右；
2．就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。
1）你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异;
2）你从这个故事得到什么启示;
3）你对 “态度决定一切”如何理解?
4) 举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。
你可以使用实例可其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

Answer 1

Three brothers, who worked for the same company , received different wages due to their different attitudes towards their work, which shows right attitude is of great help to one’s life.
Their different attitudes towards their work result in their different wages. From the story I can conclude that those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded.
Different attitudes lead to different results. Take Xiao Hua as an example. He is my classmate. Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. So he has become a top student in our class, even in the grade. With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university. However, Xiao Li, also my classmate, never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games, he turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his study.
In my opinion, attitude is everything. No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times. Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.

试题分析：首先概括该故事的内容要点，故事的概括要简练，不要照抄原文。进而找到中心论点：态度决定一切。（即故事的启示），然后举例论述文章观点，举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果，最后陈述自己的观点（结论）
点评：观点类议论文的写作的文章总体结构：
一·概括所给短文内容要点
二·过渡词引出主题句文章观点句
三·举例论述文章观点
四.自己的观点（结论）