Question

随着生活水平的不断提高与医疗技术的不断进步，中国人口老龄化问题日益凸显。根据下表提示，请以“How to solve the problem of supporting the aged”为题，谈谈自己对解决人口老龄化问题的看法。
家人：照顾老人，多看望老人，理解老人；
社区：组织有利于老人身心健康的活动；
政府：建立完善的养老体系，投资兴建敬老院。
注意：
1. 字数为100字左右；
2. 参考词汇：体系 system  敬老院 old folks’ home

Answer 1

How to solve the problem of supporting the aged?
As a result of the improvement in living standard and medical care, China is becoming an aging society.
To solve the problem, in my opinion, all the people should do their duties. Families should care for aging relations. They should spare time to see the aged. If possible, it is better so spend more time staying with them. The community should organize more activities, designed to the improvement in their physical and psychological health. The government should build a perfect system. More old folk’s homes should be built, where the aged can enjoy their life.
Luckily, more attention has been paid to the problem. Getting old won’t be such a depressing thing after all.

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【亮点说明】这篇文章涵盖了要点，简洁又不乏好的短语和句型： As a result of因为，由于，care for关心， after all To solve the problem, in my opinion, all the people should do their duties.这句话使用了不定式做目的状语和插入语， If possible, it is better so spend more time staying with them. 这句话用了省略句，The community should organize more activities, designed to the improvement in their physical and psychological health.这句话使用了过去分词做后置定语， More old folk’s homes should be built, where the aged can enjoy their life.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， Luckily, more attention has been paid to the problem. 这句话使用了pay attention to这个词组的被动语态。