Question

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霆天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。

主要内容如下：

1.感谢他的关注。

2.简介雾霾 (smog) 天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。

3.谈谈你的感想。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅；

开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数；

词数：120左右

Dear David，

I'm glad to receive your letter.

Yours，

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas. 

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作非常好些，对于环境保护的文章学生在平时的练习中经常练，学生有话可写。对于本文首先对他的关注表示感谢Thank you for your concern.进而介绍雾霾天气对人健康的不好的影响，如交通堵塞，肺癌，交通事故等等such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.来表达。最后，表达自己的观点和感想，我们应该尽力的少开车，选择环保的产品，每个人都要意识到保护环境的重要性try to drive less and choose air-friendly products.

everyone should have the environmental awareness.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：书面表达是最能体现一个学生的语言运用能力和英语思维理解的题目，议论文的写作一般采用经典的二段或三段式进行行文，议论文是比较容易写的文体，提高作文无外乎平时多练习，在练习过程中，对于写错或是不知道表达的一定要多问老师，同时还应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。