Question

1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的 词．
删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Every boy and every girl are eager for success．But what can we succeed in life？Here are my opinions：
First，we must be friendly and kindly．It allows us to make friends and survive wherever we are．Second，we must set the goal，which motivates us to pursue our dreams．Third，it's better to believe in us．Only with self-confidence we realize our goals．Fourth，we should develop good characters，such as a strong will and diligence，because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble．
As far as I'm concerning，success belongs for those who keep on trying．So let's take action now!

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍了一些如何成功的建议．第一，我们必须友好和善良；第二，制定一个目标；第三，要相信我们自己；第四，养成一些好的性格．作者坚信：成功属于那些总是在努力的人．

解答 Every boy and every girl are eager for success．But what can we succeed in life？Here are my opinions：
First，we must be friendly andkindly．It allows us to make friends and survive wherever we are．Second，we must set the goal，which motivates us to pursue our dreams．Third，it's better to believe in us．Only with self-confidence∧we realize our goals．Fourth，we should develop good characters，such as a strong will and diligence，because good qualities help us to hold on to our dreams since we get into the trouble．
As far as I'm concerning，success belongs for those who keep on trying．So let's take action now!
详解：
1．are改为is 考查主谓一致．"every+单数名词+and+every+单数名词"作主语时谓语动词用单数．
2．what改为how 考查副词．succeed是不及物动词，此处how为副词，在句中作状语．
3．kindly改为kind 考查形容词．kind为形容词，与形容词friendly并列，作be动词的表语．
4．the改为a 考查冠词．goal是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
5．us改为ourselves 考查代词．根据句意：它能激励我们自己去追求我们的梦想．此处应用反身代词ourselves作宾语．
6．加can 考查倒装句．only修饰介词短语with self-confidence放在句首，后面的句子应用部分倒装，由句意可知应加情态动词can．
7．since改为when/if 考查连词．根据句意：如果我们有麻烦．此处when/if引导时间/条件状语从句．
8．去掉the 考查冠词．get into trouble意为"有麻烦"，是固定搭配．
9．concerning改为concerned 考查固定搭配．as far as I'm concerned意为"就我而言"，是固定短语．
10．for改为to 考查介词．belong to意为"属于"，是固定搭配．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．