Question

最近中国的空气质量引起了广泛的关注。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

内容要求： 1. 简要描述漫画内容；

2. 简要分析产生这种现象的原因；

3. 针对以上现象谈谈你自己的看法（至少两点）。

注意：

1.词数150左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

2.参考词汇：口罩mask； 雾霾haze

Recently, the air quality in China _________________________________________

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Answer 1

Recently, the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.

The picture conveyed here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.

Personally, to better the air quality, the government and the common citizens should make joint efforts. Riding and walking are wise options for public travels. Meanwhile, effective laws are supposed to be made to guarantee good air quality.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给漫画写一篇关于空气质量的短文。写作要点包括：简述漫画内容；分析产生此现象的原因；谈谈自己的看法。至少要写两点看法，词数在150词左右，开头不计入总词数；注意使用参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文使用了较多的高级词汇：concern，factor，phenomenon，vehicles，major，Furthermore，joint，guarantee等，说明作者的词汇量较大，灵活运用单词进行遣词造句的能力较强；

范文注意使用Recently, In the first place, Furthermore, Besides, Personally, Meanwhile等衔接句子和段落，避免了使用firstly, secondly等一般词汇，比较有新意；

范文使用了非限制性定语从句As is indicated in the picture；with复合结构with masks covering their mouths；原因状语从句As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier；表语从句that air pollution is quite severe in China；定语从句that release a great deal of smoke等语法知识，使句式长短结合，比较协调；

范文使用了一些重要的短语：account for；large quantities of；be responsible for；contributor to；make joint efforts；are supposed to等，充实了作文的内容。

考点：看图作文