Question

13．假定你是李华．在校报英语专栏看到了学校"英语文化节"的一则招募志愿者的启事，启事中说此次文化节需要招募20名志愿者，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件．
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival is now looking for 20student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate．If you are interested，please send an application email to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef．com．
写作要点：1．表示写信意图；2．陈述应征目的；3．说明应征条件（性格、能力等）．
写作要求：1．邮件词数不少于100；2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
Dear MS Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3． 
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Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua 

Answer 1

分析 这是一封申请信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：1．表示写信意图；2．陈述应征目的；3．说明应征条件（性格、能力等）；4．再次保证并且表示感谢．
高分句型：
1 I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．句子里because引导原因状语从句； as well as 表示"也包括"；by doing做方式状语，表示"以某种方式"．
我真的想要获得这次宝贵的机会．因为通过提供我的服务，我能够提高我的组织能力，交流能力以及在公共场合说英语的信心．
2．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．句子里which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句提到的这件事．
我成功地帮助她组织了几个英语活动，获得了老师和同学的欣赏．

解答 作文范文  
One possible version：
Dear MS Chen，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class2，Grade 3．I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（点明写信目的）
   I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．【高分句型一】（陈述应征目的）As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．【高分句型二】（说明应征条件）
   I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration．（再次保证并且表示感谢）
  Looking forward to your reply．
                                 Yours truly，
                                 Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．