Question

【题目】目前中学生中，家长陪读之风盛行，有的家长甚至不惜辞职或者请长假。你们班上就这一话题进行了讨论。请根据以下要点介绍讨论的结果并简要阐述自己的观点。

38%：赞成	给孩子们做可口的饭菜，洗衣服，从而让孩子们有更多的时间学习和休息。
62%： 反对	增加经济负担；给学生造成许多精神压力；孩子的独立生活能力得不到培养。
你的观点	……

注意：1. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 词数：100左右；

3. 参考词汇：经济负担：economic pressure 精神压力：mental stress

The other day our class had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to accompany students studying at school.…

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Answer 1

【答案】The other day our class had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for parents to accompany students studying at school. As for the question, there are two different opinions.

38% of the students are for the idea that parents should accompany students studying. That is because parents can do such housework as making delicious dinner and washing clothes for students, which in turn allow students to have more time to study and have a good rest.

On the contrary, 62% of the students go against the former viewpoint. In their opinion, parents quitting the job to accompany students will add economic pressure to family. Besides, students will be under mental stress. In addition, there is no chance to develop their independence.

As far as I am concerned, I am for the latter viewpoint. In the long run, not only should students study well but also learn the ability to live independently. Only by living alone can students have the chance to grow up.

【解析】试题分析：目前中学生中，家长陪读之风盛行，有的家长甚至不惜辞职或者请长假。请根据所给要点介绍讨论的结果并简要阐述自己的观点。以所给提示为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

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