Question

目前，父母对孩子的生活、学习等方面包办现象非常普遍。请你描述这一现象以及带来的弊端，根据提示用英语写一篇短文。

1．分析该现象的原因；  2．你的建议（至少两方面 ）

注意：

1．词数100左右。         2．可适当增加细节。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Today in China, it’s not surprising that children get too much attention and some parents nearly do everything for their children.

Gradually, some of them get used to depending on their parents and lack the ability to solve problems independently. It’s believed that the increasing number of single-child families under the Family Policy accounts for this phenomenon.

To solve this problem, I suggest parents act as a guide to give children a right direction and other things are left to children because it is too much love that makes the children’s inability. As for children, they should do everything they can by themselves instead of waiting to get things done for no parents can accompany them forever. Only an independent person can live and succeed in this world.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇开发性作文，对考生的要求非常高，需要考生有较强的组织语言的能力和运用语言的功底。本文的话题是考生所熟悉的，具有可写性。在写作之前，注意谋篇布局，文章应该是三段，第一段提及这种现象，第二段谈弊端，第三段分析原因提出建议。在写作时要注意选词如independently，Gradually，accompany等高级词汇的运用。同时运用合适的连接词和句型。最后要注意对文章的润色。

【亮点说明】it’s not surprising that children get too much attention and some parents nearly do everything for their children.这句话用了it做形式主语，Gradually, some of them get used to depending on their parents and lack the ability to solve problems independently. 这句话用了get used to doing词组，It’s believed that the increasing number of single-child families under the Family Policy accounts for this phenomenon. 这句话用了It’s believed that ….句型，和account for这样的高级词组， To solve this problem, I suggest parents act as a guide to give children a right direction and other things are left to children because it is too much love that makes the children’s inability. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语，As for children, they should do everything they can by themselves instead of waiting to get things done for no parents can accompany them forever. 这句话里面的they can是定语从句，Only an independent person can live and succeed in this world.这句话用了倒装句。

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