Question

仔细观察下面这幅漫画，用英语写一篇150词左右的短文，描述图画并就“合作”这个话题，发表你的看法。开头句已给，不计入总词数。

In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In the picture ,two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time.

The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict. Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Thus things will turn into a “win-win” situation.

In conclusion, sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. If we are to succeed, cooperation plays an important role and will benefit both sides. Therefore, it’s essential that we should attach more importance to teamwork and cooperation in what we do.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，做题时：1. 认真读图，可知图画主题是关于“合作”， 2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。象范文的：Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them.用到了非限制性定语从句，4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。6. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。

考点：看图写作

点评：在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。还有要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。