Question

【题目】 书面表达

假定你是李华，你的表兄李东是一名高一年级的学生。他对学好高中英语感到很困惑，希望你给他一些建议。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，提供一些学好英语的建议。要点包括：

1. 邮件已经收到。

2. 课前预习，课上认真，课后复习；

3. 多花时间练习英语。

注意：1. 词数100左右，可适当增加内容，使得文章语篇流畅。

2. 参考词汇：预习 preview

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Xiao Dong,

I have received your letter and known that you are puzzled about English learning in high school. Here are some tips for you.

First of all, you should preview lessons before the English class. And focus on what you are learning in class. Secondly, it is a good idea if you stick to going over the lessons every night, which can help you remember what you have learned well. Last but not least, I suggest that you should spend more time practicing, listening and speaking English as often as possible. For example, you can take part in English activities, and try to imitate tapes' pronunciation. By doing this, you can build up your courage and express yourself well in English. .

I hope you will find these ideas useful. And I wish your great success and progress in learning English.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析： 本篇书面表达属于应用文，是一封关于英语学校建议的电子邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如known that you are puzzled about English learning in high school为宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语build up, take part in等短语。First of all, secondly和last的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。