Question

16．假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请成为"爱共线"的暑期志愿者．根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）．

爱共线是由民间发起的爱心公益组织，主要致力于贫困地区儿童相关的援助项目． 我们期待你的加入！ 岗位1：网页编辑（webpage editor） 岗位2：影像制作（cameraman） 岗位3：论坛管理员（forum administrator） 岗位4：活动组织（event organizer） 有意者请来信告知： 1）你个人的基本情况； 2）你所申请的岗位和申请的理由；

Answer 1

分析 试题分析：本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求写一封申请信，要求结合给出的岗位选择一个自己想申请的职位，并稍加发挥想象即可．写作时需注意以下方面：1）在信的开头一般要说明写信的目的，本文的写作目的是"希望申请某一职位"．2）在写第二部分，即正文时要注意把申请网页编辑这一岗位的三个原因的表述要详略得当，应该用适当的过渡词来起到承接作用，以使内容连贯，具有层次感．3）尽量使用多种句式结构来丰富文章语言，比如并列句、复合句和短语等，做到长短句结合．4）因为是讲述自己的特点和优势，所以要使用一般现在时．

重要短语：
apply to be申请成为，First of all首先，Secondly其次，Last but not least最后但同样重要的是，devote oneself to doing致力于做某事，Once upon a time 很久以前，have no access to education没有机会受教育，be responsible for doing负责做某事，contribute all one's energy to全力以赴，leave a deep impression on sb给某人留下深刻印象．
高分句型：
1．Once upon a time，I saw some news about these poor children who had no access to education or lacked assistance of daily necessities，which left a deep impression on me．本句中包含两个定语从句，一个是who引导的限制性定语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为I some news about these poor children．
2．Working as a webpage editor is easy for me这句较简单，为动名词短语Working as a webpage editor作主语．
3．And I assure you that I will do a great job．这句话中包含一个that引导的宾语从句．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    Hello!I'm Li Ming，who is a student from Ming Qi Middle School．After seeing your advertisement，now I'm writing this letter immediately．I want to apply to be a volunteer in your organization．The job I want to take is webpage editor．（写信目的）
    First of all，I really want to devote myself to helping children in poor areas．Once upon a time，I saw some news about these poor children who had no access to education or lacked assistance of daily necessities，which left a deep impression on me．（高分句型）So I thought I would do something for them one day．（列举优势）
    Secondly，I'm good at programming．I have learnt programming for a long time．The prizes which I won in competitions are numerous．In my class，I'm responsible for designing my class's webpage．As you can see，I think I have had much experience．Working as a webpage editor is easy for me．（高分句型）（列举优势）
    Last but not least，in summer vacation，I have no extra classes．So I can contribute all my energy to this job．（列举优势）
    As reasons above，this job is suitable for me．And I assure you that I will do a great job．（高分句型）Please let me join your organization!（表达愿望）

点评 对于英语申请信的写作要开篇点明写信的目的，想申请的岗位，并且要详细陈述自己所具备的优势，要以诚恳的语言打动读信的人，在写作中要注意灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述，合理的使用过渡语和连接词，使得整篇文章过度自然，衔接紧密．