Question

假设你是张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信(120字左右)：

1.帮他分析原因;  2.给他提出建议;  3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算.

Dear Li Ming，

I'm sorry to know that you feel uncomfortable at your new class.

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Best regards，

Yours truly，

Zhang Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming，

I'm sorry to know that you feel uncomfortable at your new class. One of the reasons, I think, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.

I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, you can talk with people around you, and be brave to ask them questions that you don't know. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.

In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.

I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible

Best regards,

Yours truly，

Zhang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文，本文是关于给张华学习英语方面的建议，如口语训练，写作等多个方面，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。