Question

【题目】假如你是学生会主席李华，你的同学Van打算暑假回国，正考虑为他妈妈带些中国特色的礼物，特发信息向你征求建议。请根据以下内容用英语给Van回复邮件。

内容要点:

1. 建议礼物:旗袍，中国结等

2. 说明选择礼物的原因

3. 表达祝福和问候

注意:1、可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

2、词数100左右。

参考词汇:旗袍 Chi-pao 中国结 Chinese knot

Dear Van,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Van,

I’m delighted to know that you are going back to your homeland during this summer holidays and that you want to bring some gifts for your mother, which symbolize Chinese culture.

From my point of view, you can buy the following present. First, I think Chi-pao, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. And I’m sure your mother will like it very much. In addition, the Chinese knot is also a nice souvenir, which is usually hung in the sitting room as a beautiful decoration. It is a symbol of good luck. I do hope it will bring your family good luck and happiness.

Have a good holiday and give my best regards to your family!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件。

第一步：审题：

文体：建议信，提纲类作文

内容：假如你是李华，用英语给你的同学Van为他妈妈的中国特色的礼物提建议回复邮件。

内容要点:1. 建议礼物:旗袍，中国结等2. 说明选择礼物的原因3. 表达祝福和问候

时态：根据提示，时态是一般现在时

结构：总分总结构

第二步：关键词（组）：

homeland；summer holidays；gifts；symbolize；Chinese culture；Chi-pao；Chinese knot；souvenir；sitting room；decoration；good luck等

第三步：连词成句：

1. I’m delighted to know that you are going back to your homeland during this summer holidays

2. you want to bring some gifts for your mother, which symbolize Chinese culture

3. I think Chi-pao, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman

4. the Chinese knot is also a nice souvenir, which is usually hung in the sitting room as a beautiful decoration

5. I do hope it will bring your family good luck and happiness

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）：

and；First；From one’s point of view；In addition；also；as等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改