Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Alice,

I was delighted to receive your letter.Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me.I receive it this morning.There is no doubt which it is of great help to me.I’m deep grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practicing my spoken English.I’ve made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class.Next month,I’ll make trip to Australia,which is organizing by my school.I hope I can practice my spoken English there as many as possible.By the way,I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter,but I'll send you more if I get any.I do hope you will have a good holiday.

Answer 1

【答案】1.on改成for

2.it删掉

3.receive改成received

4.which改成that

5.deep改成deeply

6.attentions改成attention

7.trip前加a

8.organizing改成organized

9.many改成much

10.but改成and

【解析】这是作者写给Alice的一封信，在信中作者感谢Alice送给自己的英语字典。

考查固定用法。Thank you for为某事感谢，是固定用法，所以on改成for。

考查定语从句。you bought for me.是一个省略了that的定语从句，修饰先行词the English dictionary，关系词在从句中作bought的宾语，所以it删掉。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，receive改成received。

考查固定句型。There is no doubt that毫无疑问的是，是固定句型，which改成that。

考查副词。修饰形容词grateful，用副词，deep改成deeply。

考查固定用法。pay more attention to更加注意，是固定用法，所以attentions改成attention。

考查固定用法。make a trip to去……旅行，是固定用法，所以trip前加a。

考查时态。“这次旅行”和“安排”之间是被动关系，用被动语态，所以organizing改成organized。

考查固定用法。as much as possible，中间的much只能修饰不可名词；as many as possible 其中的many 用来修改可数名词，所以many改成much。

考查连词。顺便说一下，我送你一套邮票，如果我获得其他邮票，我会送给你更多的邮票。表示并列关系，所以but改成and。