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When I first learned to write in English,I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

 

【答案】

 

 much改为many

 in改为that

 anything改为everything

 my改为a

 去掉should

 talk改为talking

 me改为myself

 show后面接it

 reads改为read

 word改为words

【解析】

试题分析:短文改错要注意句子中人称和数是否一致,时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型,固定短语的应用。要从细节着手,在平时要多积累。

 much改为many 后面的名词difficulties使用的是复数形式,故使用many修饰,much不能修饰可数名词复数形式。

 in改为that 本句中的that引导的是一个表语从句,that在句中不充当任何成分。In是多余的。

 anything改为everything  代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中。而本句是一个肯定句,使用everything。

 my改为a  固定搭配keep a diary写日记。不需要使用My来修饰名词。

 去掉should  本句中的put down与前面的keep是并列关系,不需要使用should。

 talk改为talking  固定搭配enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事。Enjoy后面接动名词doing的形式。

 me改为myself  表达自己的意思使用express oneself。使用反身代词作为express的宾语。

 show后面接it  固定搭配show sth to sb=show sb sth向某人展示某物。It指代a little。

 reads改为read  动词read是一个不规则动词,过去式和过去分词都使用read。

 word改为words  本句中的words指他所说的话,与后面的were保持一致都使用复数形式。

考点:考察短文改错

 

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