Question

假设你是李华，你收到在美国的姑母的一封电子邮件，说你刚上大学的表哥染上了抽烟的习惯。你姑母很担心他的健康，请你给你的表哥写一封电子邮件，劝他戒烟。
写作内容
1、吸烟既浪费钱又致病，甚至能引起致命性疾病；
2、吸烟对周围的人也有害，会影响同学、朋友间的关系；
3、在宿舍（dormitory）吸烟如不注意会引起火灾；
4、为了自己和他人，尽早戒烟。
写作要求
1、必须用5个句子表达全部内容；
2、电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。
Dear Wang Lin,
Congratulations on you entering the university. How are you getting on?  ______________
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lin,
Congratulations on your entering the university. How are you getting on? I was shocked to hear that you got into the habit of smoking. As we know, smoking not only wastes a lot of money, but also result in many diseases, even deadly ones. Since smoking does harms to you yourself and others around you, it may have a bad effect on the relationship betwee you and them. Besides, if you don’t smoke in the dormitory with care, it may cause a fire. For the sake of yourself and others, you should quit smoking as soon as you can.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，本文是要向表哥介绍吸烟的危害，给出大部分的要点。本文的难点在于选择合适的词汇把文字提示的内容表达出来，同时要注意选择合适的连接词把各要点连接起来。也要使用多变的句式让文章充满变化，不要过于死板。
点评：本文是要向表哥介绍吸烟的危害。对考生的谋篇布局的能力要求较高，要合理的分布各个要点，用适当的连接词来连接成流畅的短文。在选择词汇时要注意选择一些相对高级的词汇让文章的层次更高。