Question

3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I will spend the summer holiday in the country next year．Although the city is modern and convenience，there are still some problem，such as air pollution and noise．In the country，I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life．There，the air was fresh and the water is clean．Trees are green and birds are sung．I can also go  boating，fishing and swimming in the lake．What's most，I can climb the hills．All this will be interested and good for your health．Above all，I can go back to the nature．But I want to go to the country a change．I'm looking forward to my summer holiday．

Answer 1

分析 文章讲述了我准备去乡下过暑假的计划．乡下环境好，可以摆脱城市的吵杂，对健康有好处．期盼着我的假期．

解答 I will spend the summer holiday in the country next year．Although the city is modern and convenience，there are still some problem，such as air pollution and noise．In the country，I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life．There，the air was fresh and the water is clean．Trees are green and birds are sung．I can also go  boating，fishing and swimming in the lake．What's most，I can climb the hills．All this will be interested and good for your health．Above all，I can go back to the nature．But I want to go to the country∧a change．I'm looking forward to my summer holiday．
详解：
1．convenience改为convenient；形容词错误．句中convenient和modern并列作系动词的表语，要用形容词形式．
2．problem改为problems；名词错误．句中有some修饰，可数名词要用复数形式．
3．was改为is；时态错误．文章讲述的是客观事实，要用一般现在时态．
4．sung改为singing；分词错误．句中sing与主语birds构成主谓关系，要用现在分词构成进行时态．
5．most改为more；短语搭配错误．what's more而且，常用短语．
6．interested改为interesting；分词错误．句中interest作系动词的表语，表示主语this的特征和属性，要用现在分词来构成．
7．your改为my；代词错误．句意指代的是我，要用对应的形容词性物主代词．
8．the去掉；冠词错误．句中nature指大自然，不用冠词．
9．But改为So；连词错误．句意表达的是因果关系，不是转折．
10．加for；短语搭配错误．for a change换个口味，改变一下．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．