Question

书面表达 （满分 30 分）
随着经济的发展，城市交通问题越来越严重。请根据表格中的提示，写一篇短文，并谈谈自己的看法。

现状	解决方式
1.高峰期交通堵塞，浪费时间； 2.难找到停车的地方，空气质量差。	1.多建地下停车场，大力发展公共交通； 2.增强环保意识，使用替代能源。

注意：1. 文章必须包括主要内容，过渡自然。
2. 参考词汇：awareness 意识    alternative energy  替代能源  
3. 词数120左右。
With the development of Chinese economy, the traffic problem in cities is becoming more and more serious.                                                                                        
                                                                                                
                                                                                                

Answer 1

不唯一
With the development of Chinese economy, the traffic problem in cities is becoming more and more serious.
Firstly, it is very common for people to get stuck in the traffic jam during the rush hour, which is a great waste of time. What’s more, hardly can you find a parking place, especially in the center of a city. Furthermore, as a result of too many cars, the air has been seriously polluted.
Fortunately, people have come up with some good ideas. More underground parking lots should be built, and the public transport system is to be improved. Meanwhile, we should improve people’s awareness of protecting the environment and use as many alternative energy resources as possible.
As far as I am concerned, great efforts should be made to solve this problem. Riding or walking to school or work should be strongly recommended.

解析试题分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必须按照要求在作文中覆盖试题规定的所有内容要点，完成试题任务，达到预期的写作目的。在写作时，考生应该留心是否要点完整，是否有要点遗漏。在题示要点完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料为中心进行适当地发挥，适当补充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。千万不要打破常规，追求所谓的标新立异，因为这样做，往往会适得其反，不但不能出色地完成书面表达的任务，而且最终拿不到自己心目中理想的作文分数。这里应该注意动词的时态及人称的变化。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：在写作时，考生应该尽可能地减少错误，避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误，尽量避开自己使用起来没有把握的单词和句子。如果为了追求句式的变化而出现了一些本来可以避免的错误，就得不偿失了。在保证准确的前提下，考生才可以考虑句式的变化，应用较多的语法结构。