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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Friday we students in the five grade were organized to offer service at the railway station. We were dividing into small groups to finish different tasks. Upon their arrival in the early morning, we soon got down to help the others. Some picked up rubbish on the ground and provides information for passengers. Some helped the passengers with heavy luggages. And the rest taught passengers what to use the ticket vending machine. Tired as we were, we felt happily when receiving thanks. It is believed that if by helping each other we will make the society better place.

Answer 1

【答案】Last Friday we students in the grade were organized to offer service at the railway station. We were into small groups to finish different tasks. Upon arrival in the early morning, we soon got down to the others. Some picked up rubbish on the ground and information for passengers. Some helped the passengers with heavy . And the rest taught passengers to use the ticket vending machine. Tired as we were, we felt when receiving thanks. It is believed that by helping each other we will make the societybetter place.

【解析】

第一处：five改为fifth 考查序数词。 表示几年级要用序数词，故将five改为fifth。

第二处：dividing改为divided 考查谓语动词。此处是动词的被动语态形式，因此要用过去分词。

第三处： their改为our 考查代词。此处与上句保持一致，因此their改为our。

第四处：help改为helping 考查非谓语动词。 此处to是介词，其后要跟名词或动名词作宾语。故将help 改为helping。

第五处：provides改为provided 考查动词的时态。此处and连接并列谓语，and前的picked up是过去时，and后也要用过去时。故将provides改为provided。

第六处：luggages改为luggage 考查名词的数。luggage是不可数名词，因此将luggages改为luggage。

第七处：what改为how 考查连接词。根据句意可知此处表示"如何"，因此将what改为how。

第八处：happily改为happy。考查形容词。此处作felt的表语，要用形容词形式。

第九处：删除if 考查固定句型。It is believed that...是固定句型，that后直接跟主语，if是多余的。

第十处：better前加a 考查冠词的用法。此处表示一个比较好的地方，故要不定冠词a。