Question

【题目】全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气影响了人们的呼吸，工厂释放污染的气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排入河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。请根据以上事实写一篇以保护环境为主题的文章，我们要采取以下措施来保护我们共有的家园。

1. 污染正威胁我们的生存。

2. 地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它

3. 政府已采取更多的措施去解决这些问题，法律已被通过去制止污染。

4. 坚信我们的家园会变得越来越好。

注意：1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数

Protecting the Environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

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Answer 1

【答案】Protecting the Environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

【解析】试题分析：本文要求写一篇以保护环境为主题的文章，要求我们采取措施来保护我们共有的家园。需要用正确的英语把给出的要点准确表达出来。内容要点如下：1. 污染正威胁我们的生存；2. 地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它；3. 政府已采取更多的措施去解决这些问题，法律已被通过去制止污染；4. 坚信我们的家园会变得越来越好。写作材料已经给的很详细，写作的时候关键在于要点不能有遗漏和省略。还要有适当的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章多处运用了被动语态：Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.等和现在进行时态：Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.和Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.等，彰显了句式的变化和感情色彩；另外词组cope with（处理）。