分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story
与通常的反应相反的,他们的车被抓了,薛显示出高程度的宽容和同情,这有助于故事的和谐.
高分句型二:
Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior.
尽管贫富差异,自卑者应该始终把诚实放在第一位,而过上好生活的人应该表现出更多的同情和自卑.
解答 One possible version:
Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW.Moved by his deed,the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education.
Chen has really set a good example to our fellow Chinese students.Though he could have left the scene unpunished,he decided to shoulder the cost of repairs.Meanwhile,that car driver Xue didn't pale in comparison with the boy.Contrary to the common reaction when their cars get scratched,Xue displayed a high degree of tolerance and compassion,which contribute to the harmony of the story(高分句型一).
As far as I am concerned,such harmonious relationship between them shows great advances in social morality.Despite the difference in wealth,the inferior should always put honesty in the first place,and those who enjoy a better life should show more empathy with the inferior(高分句型二).
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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