Question

【题目】近年来我国多地雾疆天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康和生活。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇文章，向某英语报社投稿。
提示：
1).对现状的描述；
2).对生活造成的影响；
3).分析雾霾形成的原因；
4).建议减少雾霾的措施。（至少两点）
注意：
1).上下文连贯，行文流畅。
2).词数150个左右（开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
雾霆的：hazy
Dear Editor,
Recently many places in China were blanketed with thick fog.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Recently many people in China were blanketed with thick fog.The Air Quality Index in most parts reached 500. Everything around disappeared from our sight.Some highways were closed.More traffic jams and accidents happened.People had to wear masks.What's more,many people found it difficult to breathe.

The heavy hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors.First,the severely polluted environment contributed a Jot to this nightmare.Second,the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role.The cars send off a lot of poisonous gas.

In my opinion,we should call on people to use mote public transport,thus reducing the number of cars in the streets.Besides,some factories which cause pollution should be closed down.What's more,we have to do more to raise people's awareness of environmental protection.Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.

Best regards!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生就雾霾天气给人们的健康和生活带来的影响，给英语报社投稿。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1).对现状的描述；2).对生活造成的影响；3).分析雾霾形成的原因；4).建议减少雾霾的措施。（至少两点），具有半开放性。写作时考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除此之外，还要给出自己的建议，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更上档次。在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词让文章看起来流畅，有条理。