Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。?
During my winter vacation , I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma. One Friday afternoon, I went to a cellphone store and chose a large button phone special designed for seniors. I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend. Upon receive the phone , Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it. I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed. Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away .Under my help, she successfully called her good friend .That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her .They all praised what thoughtful I was.

Answer 1

【小题1】spend→spent
【小题2】special→specially
【小题3】them→  it
【小题4】receive→  receiving
【小题5】eager后面加to
【小题6】patiently前面had 去掉
【小题7】but→and
【小题8】Under→With
【小题9】neighbor →neighbors
【小题10】what → how

解析试题分析：
【小题1】I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma.短文是叙述过去的事情，背景时态是过去时，所以spend改为过去式spent。
【小题2】and chose a large button phone special designed for seniors.修饰动词designed应该用副词形式，所以把special改为副词specially。
【小题3】I gave them to my grandma 从上文可知是把买的手机给grandma，代替单数名词应该用it，所以把them改为 it 。 
【小题4】Upon receive the phone , Grandma was very happy 。upon为介词后面应该用动名词做宾语，所以把receive改为 receiving。
【小题5】Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it. 形容词eager后应该用to do ，构成 be eager to do短语“渴望做某事”，所以在eager后面加to 。
【小题6】I had patiently explained all the important functions 从文中可知explained动作只是简单的叙述过去的动作，没发生在任何过去的动作之前，不存在过去的过去，不应该用过去完成时，所以patiently 前面had 去掉。
【小题7】Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away .learned 和 wanted 之间是并列关系所以把转折连词but改为并列连词and。
【小题8】Under my help, she successfully called her good friend .With one’s help 为固定短语“在某人的帮助下”，所以把介词Under改为 With。
【小题9】Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone 从后面句子They all praised what thoughtful I was.中的 They判断 neighbor应该是多人，所以把neighbor 改为 neighbors。
【小题10】They all praised what thoughtful I was. 从结构可知what thoughtful I was 是感叹句，感叹句如果对形容词感叹，应该用how+ adj +主谓结构，所以把what 改为 how。
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