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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday, I was on a train during my journey to home. I had reserved a seat, that made me quite relaxing. However, in front of my seat there was a couple travelled with two little kids. Since they had only one seat, there was no space with the man. The weather was also cold. I decide to move a little bit and share my seat with the man so that he could sit down and travel comfortable. The man was very grateful and said thanks to him again and again. There was big smile on his face.

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【解析】

本文是记叙文。文章讲述了作者在火车上的一段经历，作者帮助了一对带着两个孩子的夫妻。

1.去掉to。home为副词，到家回家，前面不加介词to故去掉to。

2.考查定语从句。此处是非限制性定语从句，引导词不能用that，指代整个主句，从句中做主语，用关系代词which。故将that改为which

3.考查ed形式形容词。表示人的感受，用过去分词变化来的形容词；ing形式形容词表示事物的特征，此处表示感到轻松，应使用ed形式形容词。故将relaxing改为relaxed。

4.考查非谓语动词。Travel作定语，与逻辑主语a couple是主动关系，表示主动进行，用现在分词。故将travelled改为travelling。

5.考查介词。没有空间给那位男士，用介词 for，表示目的。故将with改为for。

6.考查动词时态。全文故事发生在过去，用一般过去时故将decide改为decided。

7.考查副词。修饰动词travel，应用副词故将comfortable改为comfortably。

8.考查代词。我为男士腾出空间，因此男士感谢我故将him改为me。

9.考查冠词。smile 意为“笑容”时为可数名词，单数前面加不定冠词，表泛指，且big是以辅音音素开头的词，应用a故在big前加a。

10.考查名词。固定短语：bring sb. sth.应用名词happiness。故将happy改为happiness。