Question

【题目】短文改错

Most students go to Internet bars play video games, that takes much of their precious time. Some students even stayed in Internet bars day and night, forgot their studies. No doubt these students will finally end up with their bright future destroy. Furthermore, some student log onto unhealthy websites accidental. And they are finally absorbed to the excitement of reading unhealthy stories or watching dirty videos. All these are harmful to the teenagers and if only this is not controlled or the use of the Internet is not properly guided, some of us will go the wrong way.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】在play前面加to

【2】that改为which

【3】 stayed改为stay

【4】forgot改为forgetting

【5】destroy改为destroyed

【6】student改为students

【7】accidental改为accidentally

【8】to改为in

【9】删除only

【10】us改为them

【解析】

试题分析：一些青少年沉迷于网络，最终忘了学习，一些人甚至会误入歧途。

【1】在play前面加to 考查非谓语动词。大多数学生上网吧是为了玩电子游戏。to play video games，动词不定式作目的状语。

【2】that改为which 考查定语从句。根据前面逗号判断，此句是一个非限制性定语从句，指代前面整个句子，且在从句中作主语。故改为which。

【3】 stayed改为stay 考查时态。文章是用一般现在时讲述的，故将stayed改为stay。

【4】 forgot改为forgetting 考查非谓语动词。一些学生日日夜夜待在网吧里，结果忘了他们的学习。表示自然而然的结果，故用现在分词作结果状语。

【5】 destroy改为destroyed 考查非谓语动词。destroy与bright future是逻辑上的动宾关系，表被动，故用过去分词。

【6】student改为students 考查名词。some“一些”后接可数名词复数形式。故改为students。

【7】 accidental改为accidentally考查副词。一些学生偶尔地登录了不健康的网站。副词accidentally修饰动词log。故改为accidentally。

【8】to改为in 考查介词。be absorbed in……，专心致志于……，固定短语。故改为in。

【9】删除only 考查连词。如果这种现象不被控制，这些都会对青少年有害。故去掉only。

【10】us改为them 考查代词。如果网络没有恰当的引导，一些青少年将会误入歧途。此处指代teenagers ，故改为them。