Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

The 18-year-old girl from Linyi, Shandong province scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications.

On Aug 19, Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was due to receive student funding. Following the call, Xu transferred a 9,900-yuan "activation fee" into the man’s bank account, hoping the money would appear in her student account, but it never did.

After discovering they had been cheated, the family immediately reported the incident to the police, but Xu was said to be frustrated. On their way home, she suddenly fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her, she passed away.

The death of Xu yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society, and once again, it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺诈).

So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?

Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee’s information online. The information includes the examinee’s name, school, phone number, and address. The personal information of examinee has become the target of the online fraud industry.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2. 用约120个词就“Personal information leakage”谈谈你的看法和感受，内容包括：

（1）简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性；

（2）就如何保护个人信息提几点建议（至少两点）。

【写作要求】

1. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

Answer 1

【答案】

A girl from Shandong, who would soon begin her university life, was cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage. The heavy blow claimed her life, which aroused anger in society.

The leakage of personal information is of great harm. Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls, but also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger. Thus, the protection of personal information is of vital importance in order for common people to maintain a peaceful and safe life, as well as to protect one’s own fortune.

Here are the tips on how to protect one’s personal information. Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted. Also, avoid connecting smart phones to any untrusted WiFi in public places. Apart from the efforts of common people, the government must spare no effort to fight against criminals selling others’ personal information.

【解析】

试题分析：依据写作要求文章要分两部分来写，第一部分用约30个单词写出上文概要；第二部分用约120个词就“Personal information leakage”谈谈你的看法和感受，内容包括：（1）简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性；（2）就如何保护个人信息提几点建议（至少两点）。在第一部分约30词的概括中要注意人﹑事﹑理的概括呈现，写作时不能摘抄文中的句子，必须要进行概括且能够使用较为高级的句型句式；在第二部分约120词的写作中一方面需要简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性，另一方面就如何保护个人信息提出至少两点建议。写作时要把所要求的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文属于读写任务型写作，采用三段式，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。第一段中的“who would soon begin her university life；which aroused anger in society”使用非限制性定语从句；第二段中“Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls, but also…”运用了倒装句句式；Thus等连接词的运用也使得行文更为流畅。