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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain, It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, to might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉of'

【2】Have→Having

【3】that→which

【4】becomes→became

【5】day前加the

【6】Interesting→Interestingly'

【7】by→with/to

【8】drank→drunk

【9】cup→cups

【10】grow→growth

【解析】

【1】第一行的I’m reading是定语从句，修饰the book，read及物，故去掉of。

【2】作主语应该用动名词，把第三句的have改为having。

【3】考查非限制性定语从句。根据前面的逗号可知，是非限制性定语从句，不能用that，因此，把that改为which。

【4】考查时态，根据后半句可知，用的是一般过去时，故把becomes改为became。

【5】这里特指“那天”，用the day，故在day前加the。

【6】考查副词。修饰整个句子，用副词，故把interesting改为interestingly。

【7】考查固定搭配。have a connection with/ to sth与......有联系，故把by改为with/to。

【8】考查被动语态。茶是被饮用的，应该用被动，drink的过去分词是drunk，故把drank改为drunk。

【9】当茶在英国开始流行起来时，为了适应英国人的习惯，带有杯把的杯子变得急需起来。英国用复数形式，故把cup改为cups。

【10】make for是介词短语，后加名词，故把grow改为名词growth。