Question

假设你叫李华。你所在的城市要为明年暑假招聘英语导游，你打算应聘。请根据下列提示，用英语准备一份面试稿。
1.爱好英语，口语熟练，经常与外国网友（net-pel)进行语音聊天；
2.性格开朗，思维敏捷，善于与人沟通；
3.本地人，熟悉所在城市历史与文化。
注意：
1.字数：100-120；
2.可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello!
My name is Li Hua. It's a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation.
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Thank you.

Answer 1

Hello!
My name is Li Hua. It’s a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation.
To begin with, as a senior high student, I’m crazy about English and can speak it fluently. I’m used to practicing speaking English in everyday life. For example, I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral English. Besides, I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice, which I think is a quality that a good guide should have. Above all, as a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture. So I’m sure that the foreigners will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city.
If I am given the chance to be a guide, I’ll spare no effort to do it well. In a word, I’m looking forward to it.
Thank you.

试题分析：本文是一篇给材料作文，或者说半开放作文，写一份面试稿，实际上就是写一封信。你打算应聘你所在的城市要为明年暑假招聘英语导游，要点已经给出1.爱好英语，口语熟练，经常与外国网友（net-pel)进行语音聊天；2.性格开朗，思维敏捷，善于与人沟通；3.本地人，熟悉所在城市历史与文化和具体要求。在行文中，我们可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文中就使用了合理的连词和较高级的语法结构，使文章结构严谨，增色不少。
【写作亮点】：For example, I often voice chat with some English net-pels in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral English. Besides, I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice, which I think is a quality that a good guide should have. 这两句， Besides表并列，前后两个句子都使用了定语从句。定语从句的使用不仅严谨的表达完整意思，又使文章浑然一体。同时文章中使用了适当的连词，比如：To begin with，Besides，Above all,等，使用文章结构严谨，浑然一体。
点评：书面表达中的写信类作文，我们首先要完整的正确的表达出所有的写作要点。在写作中，如果语言基础好的话，多用较高级语法结构，这样可以使文章增色不少。同时要合理的使用适当的连词，这样文章才能结构严谨，浑然一体。