Dear Sir,
I’m a student of Senior 1. I am writing to ask you for some advice.
Since last week, my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board in the school. They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. Besides, they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.
However, I have my own thoughts. If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. I really don’t know how to deal with the disagreement between us. Can you give me your advice?
Yours,
Li Ming
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达. 平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】范文结构清晰，语言流畅，多用词组和句型：make full use of充分利用，deal with处理， They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever. 这句话用了it做形式主语， they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time, and that I can also develop the ability to look after myself.这句话用了it做形式宾语， If staying at home in the evening, I will have more time to work at my lessons. 这句话用了省略句，At the same time, I can learn what I think I’m not good at. 这句话用了宾语从句。还有范文还使用了Besides让文章更加连贯。
