Question

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，高中毕业后想到美国弗吉尼亚大学(University of Virginia)计算机专业深造，请根据以下提示用英语写一封入学申请：

1．性别，年龄，毕业学校；   2．学习情况及特长；

3．申请入学的理由；        4．联系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com

注意：1．词数：120～150；       2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                               

I look forward to your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam.

I’m writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university.

First, please allow me to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June. I’m an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects, in particular Internet, Technology and English. This is the reason why I want to major in Computer Science in an English speaking country. I’m also good at computer program design and basketball.

I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoy a good reputation all around the world. It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

My e-mail address is lihua93@ yahoo.com, and I’ll appreciate it very much if I can receive your reply!

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一封申请书，重点是介绍自己的相关情况，性别，年龄，毕业学校，学习情况及特长；申请入学的理由大部分的要点都已经给出，考生要根据要求做适当的扩展，但是这样的扩展一定要简洁，不要啰嗦，在写作的时候要注意词汇的选择和运用，要注意使用高级的句型，如强调句和倒装句等，让文章的句式多样化。