Question

【题目】短文改错：

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr. Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony, who enjoyed listening to music very much. So he bought a piano to Tony, hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day. The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed enjoy every minute of it. However, half a year later, he told his father that he was tiring of practising the piano. Heard this, Mr. Smith said, “Tony, it is one thing to be fond of listen to music, and it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself. You can never play the piano well even if you don’t practise more.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】a 8-year-old son改为an

【2】bought a piano to Tony改为for

【3】he can become改为could

【4】put her heart改为his

【5】seemed enjoy every minute在seemed后加to

【6】he was tiring改为tired

【7】Heard this改为Hearing

【8】and it is another thing改为but

【9】perform skillful改为skillfully

【10】well even if去掉even

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】a 8-year-old son改为an 考查冠词。一个八岁的孩子，eight是元音开头，故用an.

【2】bought a piano to Tony改为for 考查动词。Buy sb sth 等于buy sth for sb ,给某人买某物。

【3】he can become改为could 考查情态动词。表示对将来的虚拟，所以改为could.

【4】put her heart改为his 考查人称代词。Put one’s heart into doing 全心投入做某事，主语是小男孩，所以用他的，his.

【5】seemed enjoy every minute在seemed后加to 考查动词。句意：他好象很享受每一分钟。Seem to do 好象做某事。

【6】he was tiring改为tired 考查形容词。句意：他告诉他的父亲他厌倦了弹钢琴。Be tired of 厌倦了某事。

【7】Heard this改为Hearing 考查非谓语动词。句意：听到这，史密斯先生说。两个句子共用一个主语，主动用doing来表达。

【8】and it is another thing改为but 考查连词。句意：喜欢听音乐是一回事，而独立优美的表演又是另外一回事。两个句子之间表示转折，故用but.

【9】perform skillful改为skillfully 考查副词。句意：你自己弹的好又是另外一件事。修饰动词perform用副词形式。

【10】well even if去掉even 考查连词。句意：如果你多加练习，你不能弹好。Even if 即使，if 如果，两个句子是条件关系，故去掉even。