Question

【题目】短文改错记叙文

Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so去掉

【2】her→him

【3】say→said

【4】toilet前加the

【5】passing→passed

【6】was told

【7】immediate→immediately

【8】or→and

【9】mile→miles

【10】in→with

【解析】

【1】because为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。

【2】前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。

【3】并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。

【4】此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。

【5】句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。

【6】tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。

【7】副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。

【8】并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。

【9】15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。

【10】在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。