Question

书面表达 （满分25分）
假定你是一名中学生，名叫王林，写一封建议信给21st Century的编辑，反映目前滥养宠物的问题。你认为宠物过多，噪音扰民；污染环境；你周围许多人尤其是小孩都曾经被吓到或咬伤；甚至会导致某些疾病的传播，所以你希望得到媒体的关注和支持。
注意：1、词数120左右
2、短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time ,but I really want to tell you something about he problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                                                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours truly
wang lin

Answer 1

March  28,  2010
Dear editor,
I’m sorry to occupy your precious time , but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.
I consider the problem more and more serious for the following reasons. First of all, as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more ，it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.
Yours truly
wang lin

这是一篇以提纲写建议信的作文。信的开头结尾已经给出，只要写出正文就行，要点已经很明确，反映目前滥养宠物的问题。重点也很突出，有5个要点，只要把各个要点加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，适当运用复杂句，如as is known to people, pets make too much noise that troubles residents a lot.和 it’s widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment which makes people quite uncomfortable.但要注意，文章必须加上一些关联词是文章更通顺。