Question

【题目】假定你是李华，收到好友Jim寄来的明信片，邀请你加入WCS (Wildlife Conservation Society)的暑期项目。你对此非常感兴趣，请你写一封回信给他表示祝贺，并了解相关信息。

Dear Li Hua,

How excited I am when I’m accepted as a volunteer of WCS! You know I have been saving the abandoned animals. So in this upcoming summer. I can do more to help the lovely animals and even the endangered ones. And I really expect you to join us! I am sure we will make a difference to nature and people!

Yours,

Jim

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jim,

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Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am very proud of you when knowing that you are admitted to be a volunteer of Wildlife Conservation Society. Please accept my heartiest congratulations on this meaningful experience in your upcoming summer.

Having always appreciated your devotion to wildlife conservation, I firmly believe that it is your enthusiasm and determination that make you selected to be the volunteer. How I wish to join you and be a volunteer like you! You know I am also interested in wildlife and eager to do something meaningful in my summer holidays. Would you please tell me how I could join the Society? And where can I apply for it? Is it necessary for me to do some preparations, such as filling in the application form, passing the language test or anything else?

I will appreciate it if you could send me more information! I am sure that it is a good chance to enrich my knowledge of wildlife conservation and I will make even greater effort to do something for the nature and people.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，收到好友Jim寄来的明信片，邀请你加入WCS (Wildlife Conservation Society)的暑期项目。你对此非常感兴趣，请你写一封回信给他表示祝贺，并了解相关信息。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be proud of；be admitted to；devotion to；be interested in；eager to do...；apply for；make effort等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。