Question

10．假如你是李华，你的好友王菲给你来信说，她的父母最近总是吵架，为此她很苦恼，问你该怎么办，希望你能给她提一些建议．
请你根据下列要点提示，给她写封回信．
1．等你的父母冷静下来以后，分别找他们好好谈谈；
2．跟你的父母说，你非常爱他们；
3．向你的父母许诺，你会好好学习，不会让他们失望的；
4．拿出你父母的以前的照片，让他们回想往日的幸福时光．
词数：100左右．
Dear Wang Fei，
I am very sorry to have learned that
                                                                       
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息写封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：等你的父母冷静下来以后，分别找他们好好谈谈；跟你的父母说，你非常爱他们；向你的父母许诺，你会好好学习，不会让他们失望的；拿出你父母的以前的照片，让他们回想往日的幸福时光．
 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：at present目前，现在；calm down平静下来；Last but not least最后同样最重要；
I can fully understand your present feelings，for I had such experience two years ago．（高分句型一）
Third，it would be a good idea if you promise them that you will study hard and that you won't let them down．（高分句型二）
On seeing these photos，they will think of all the happy days they spent together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Fei，
     I am sorry to have learned that your parents are always quarrelling with each other at present．I can fully understand your present feelings，for I had such experience two years ago．（高分句型一）Now let me give you several suggestions．
     First，you can have a heart-to-heart talk with one parent at a time after they calm down．Second，you should tell them that you love them very much．Third，it would be a good idea if you promise them that you will study hard and that you won't let them down．（高分句型二）Last but not least，why not try to show them their old photos？On seeing these photos，they will think of all the happy days they spent together．（高分句型三）Maybe they will forgive and forget．
     I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
     Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．