Question

【题目】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，以“My Spring Festival Without Fireworks”为题，介绍你和家人过2018年春节的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：庙会 temple fair （试题版权：百强校英语解析团队专供）

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Answer 1

【答案】My Spring Festival Without Fireworks

Before the Chinese Spring Festival, a notice was posted on Beijing TV, calling upon the citizens of Beijing not to set off fire crackers for the sake of the improvement of air quality. The ban on fireworks was highly recognized by my family.

Although there were no fireworks, the festival atmosphere wasn’t lighter. United with my grandparents on the Eve of the festival, we took our time to have our big meal, enjoying the Spring Festival gala without the interruption of the noise of the firecrackers. On the festival, together with my family, I visited different temple fairs, where a lot of Chinese traditional performances were on show. I was so amazed by a lion dance with four lions standing on a small ball that I couldn’t help taking pictures. But what attracted me most in the temple fairs was the foods from all over China.

After the festival, it was surprised that every citizen received a letter of thanks from the government for what we had done during the festival. Without fireworks, the air pollution, as well as the number of fire cases, was greatly reduced. I am proud to be one of the citizens and believe that one small change made by everyone can contribute to making a better city.

【解析】本文属于图画作文。图画作文的写作要领：1、根据提示，准确审题。要注意文体，人物和时态。2、认真读图，把握情境，进行图文转换。从整体上把握所呈现的主要内容，围绕特定的主题合理想象。然后将图画所传达的信息以文字的形式呈现出来，并对转换后的内容重新组合，确定主要内容。 3、发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象，发表自己的联想或感想。4、确定段落，拟好提纲，斟酌词句，组句成文。

亮点：本文要点齐全，写作层次清楚，以时间顺序展开全文，能紧扣图片要点，上下文连贯。在表达句式上，既有主动语态又用被动语态，句式结构灵活多变。既简单句又有并列句，还有大量的复合句，如定语从句，状语从句和名词从句，恰当地使用非谓语，句式灵活生动而丰富多彩。文章中大量地运用了较高级词汇，从而增加文章的可读性。

第一段开门见山地提出春节前北京禁放烟花爆竹的禁令。在这一段中运用了由before引导状语从句，在从句中运用了非谓语（calling upon the citizens of Beijing not to set off fire crackers）

第二段中指出虽没有烟花但节日气氛一点没有少。在本段中讲述了春节期间和家人过2018年春节的全过程。本段中的句式最为复杂。文中运用了由although引导的状语从句，非谓语作状语（United with my grandparents on the Eve of the festival, we…enjoying the Spring Festival），where引导的非限制性定语从句（…, where lot of Chinese traditional performances were on show），so…that…的常用句型；主语从句（what attracted me most in the temple fairs was the foods from all over China）

最后一段叙述了节日过后人们对此的反映。在本段中运用了常用句式（, it was surprised that从句）和宾语从句（…for what we had done during the festival）及复杂句（I am proud to be one of the citizens and believe that one small change made by everyone can contribute to making a better city.）。