Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。你班同学张强即将去国外读书，下面四幅图描述了同学们为他送行的过程，请根据图片的先后顺序用英语写一篇日记。

注意：1. 日记的开头已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于60。

Monday, March 10 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】Monday, March 10 Fine

This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us. We were all moved to tears. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.

At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment. True friendship won't be weakened by distance. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。同学张强要去国外学习，本篇要求考生根据图片所给的内容写一篇日记。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

根据图片提示，该日记主要包括以下内容

张强发言，表达对友谊的看法

同学们给张强特别的礼物

张强让同学在T恤上签名

大家一起拍照留念

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

hold a meeting/ study abroad/ in the beginning/ everlasting/ move to tears/ present/ sign/ precious/ memorize/ hear-shaped

第三步：连词成句

1. This afternoon, we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang, who was going to study abroad.

2. In the beginning, he made a brief speech to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us.

3. We were all moved to tears.

4. Then came the moment to present him with the special gift, a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together.

5. Afterwards, we signed on his T-shirt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.

6. At last, we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment.

7. True friendship won't be weakened by distance.

8. We'll surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）