Question

假设你是红光中学的学生李明，上周在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：

参加英语角的益处；2、坚持写英语日记的作用；3、英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。

注意：1. 词数：不少于100；

      2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。3. 文章开头已给出，不计算在总词汇中。

My name Liming , a student from HongGuang Middle School.                               

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version

My name Liming,a student from HongGuang Middle School. I got the first place in the English Speech Contest，which was held by our school not long ago. Here I feel delighted to share my experience in learning English with you.

Firstly, I think, taking part in English Corners is of great help to improve my speaking and listening. So whenever there is an opportunity,I willgrasp it and motivated my interest to study English.

Secondly, I keep on writing English diaries，which enables me to express what happens in my daily life and in this way I can practice my written English.

Thirdly, what interests me most is to surf English Reading on the Internet . As we all know , we need extensive reading to broaden our horizons , so it is a better way to develop a good habit of reading English materials every day.

In conclusion, Rome was not built in a day .Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类写作。文章给出了简单的汉语提示，话题是与英语学习相关的内容，贴近学生生活，让学生有话可写。成文时应注意：1、内容要齐全：（1）参加英语角的益处；（2）坚持写英语日记的作用；（3）英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。2、人称：第一人称；3、时态：一般现在时；4、使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型；5、恰当使用一些连词和插入语使文章自然、流畅。

【亮点说明】使用了高级句型：I got the first place in the English Speech Contest，which was held by our school not long ago. whenever there is an opportunity,I willgrasp it and motivated my interest to study English. I keep on writing English diaries，which enables me to express what happens in my daily life and in this way I can practice my written English. 倒装句：Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal. 使用不定式句型：it is a better way to develop a good habit of reading English materials every day. 短语：taking part in；keep on；got the first place；stick to

考点：考查学生英语语言的综合运用能力。